Nicely written by Dina – Explaining few mistakes below

OK let me say that I am graduated from faculty of commerce in 2017 then after my graduation I applied for many jobs in my major as an accountant but unfortunately I was rejected
Because I don’t have any experience (fresh graduated)
Really I love English it’s my favorite language ever so I decided to improve it to work with my English in any major
There was a good offer to be an English teacher at language school for grade 2
I was applied there and I have worked in that school for 8 months
During my work I was recommended to teach the high grades there and I already tought grade 5
Although all the stress that I felt but really I enjoyed working there it was good chance and I benefit and learnt lots of things in teaching
Now I work in another school
And I hope to be in a better place soon inshallah😁😁

 

 

Mistake-1

Never say AM GRADUATED

Am+second/third form of verb X

Say  :- I am graduated (correct)

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Mistake – 2

Use comma, when required

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Mistake – 3

Never use “BUT” and “Unfortunately” together

Use “any” of them

Mistake -4

Don’t say

I “was applid”

Say

I applied

 

Read:-

175+ secrets to improve English Grammar in 2018 – English Ma’am

Difference between “Would” and “Should”

Difference between “Would” and “Should”

Should is the past tense of “shall.”

Would is the past tense of “will”

“Should” is used for necessary actions

“Would” is used for customary action.

Let’s know their difference, through the following sentences

 

“Should “

You should get up early in the morning

You shouldn’t eat oily food regularly

You should always speak positive about others

Your shouldn’t backbite

You should always be calm and composed

You shouldn’t sleep late at night

You should go for a walk daily

You shouldn’t lie

You should have faith in Almighty

You should be sincere in your work

You shouldn’t be mean to anyone

You should never talk ill about others

You shouldn’t be jealous with anyone

You should work hard

 

 

“Would”

I would usually prefer cab over my persona car for going to office

I would rather sleep rather than patrying all night

I would go at the earliest

They wouldn’t let me do my work

She wouldn’t listen to me

He wouldn’t concentrate on his studies

Would you like to have coffee or tea?

They would never want me to be friends with my colleague

She would be speaking today

They would go to my house tomorrow

 

Read: Where should I use “Over” and “Above”

 

 

Happy Birthday Khairul Anam Fagge on your 24th B’day (From your Indian friend) 

Happy Birthday Khairul Anam Fagge on your 24th B’day (From your Indian friend)

Your elder brother Arpit Sharma wish you “Khairul Anam Fagge” on your 24th Birthday

Dear Khairul Anam Fagge,

I can’t thank you more for being the most loving, caring and awesome friend

I can’t thank you more for giving the most loving, caring and awesome company by sharing so much and have a great bond in the course of time.

It indeed proved to be such a memorable get together in the company of my friends

Keep on working hard. Success will touch your feet for sure.

Once again, Happy B’day.

Remember me in your prayers.

Thanks again for being my friend.

You rock Khairul Anam Fagge 🙂

Your lovingly,

Arpit Sharma
English Teacher
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Apology letter to HR for being late

  • Apology letter to the HR Department 

The HR,

X Technology ,

Aliganj, Lucknow

Subject (Apologizing to the HR for being late)

Sir/Ma’am,

I am Arpit Sharma, a marketing employee in the esteemed organization , whole heartedly apologize for coming late.

 

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Yes, I accept that, I should have been more careful and sincere and dutiful while imparting my role as a responsible employee

I also admit that you may have overlooked my childish behavior, but now I realise that it may have caused a lot of hardships to you.

I do admit everything and I sincerely apologize.

Read : Letter to the Principal requesting to take part in Annual Day

 

Sir, mistakes do happen and I accept them and I am hopeful you will forgive me

I want to assure you that I have become sincere and dutiful not just as an employee but also as a human being. I am more caring and compassionate

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Please accept my sincere apologies

 

I will be highly obliged,

Thank You in advance ,

Regards,

Arpita Sharma

Marketing employee

X Company

11–01–2017

 

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Writing a letter to DAD taking permission for excursion

Writing a letter to DAD taking permission for excursion

Papa,

I am pleased to inform you about the exhibition of India’s freedom fighters being held in YZ Road, Nalakonda, Lucknow.

Read : Letter to HR about available job vacancies

Yes, as students where history is one of the main subjects, all my friends and I wish to go for an educational trip to the place for gaining an insight about our freedom fighters who have laid down their lives for the country.

Not just our class, but all the other sections of the class, such as A, B and C are equally excited to visit the place.

  • The visit won’t just give us insights about the importance of struggle and bravery, but will equally give us new found spirit of NATIONALISM and motivation and a a sense of belongingness for the country.
  • Additionally, I am sure, that the visit will help us clear the concepts of various moments such as Quit India Movement etc.
  • Also, it may well help us remember the dates of the events, as often we become confused of remembering them.

Yours lovingly,

Arpita Sharma,

 

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Editing the mistakes of Israr Aslam’s letter

A letter to the principal of our school to give me a transfer certificate

Assalam Alaikum dear Sir,

I am studying in your school for last 3 years, you will be glad to hear that, I got 1st position in every exams, it was my dream to complete my higher education here in this school, because it provided a flourished learning environment for every student. But unfortunately we are living in a rental house here, the renter asked to evacuate the Lodging house, he gave us 3 days to wipe it out, so I can’t complete my studies in this school, I need an immediate transfer certificate to admit myself in another school,

I therefore kindly request to release my transfer certificate as soon as possible.

Thanks your obedient
Israr Ali Brohi

 

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Firstly, write down the complete address of the school on the left side

Then

Subject :- (Requesting for Transfer certificate due to change of residence)

Then

Sir/Ma’am

Then begin by mentioning your name and class.

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Here is the detailed letter:-

 

 

The Principal,

XYZ School,

Y area,

Z city,

Subject :- (Requesting for Transfer certificate due to change of residence)

Sir/ Ma’am,

This is Israr Aslam of Class 10th – A, requests you to provide me transfer certificate due to change in residence.

Due to a personal emergency, my father is shifting to another location within three days.  As the new residence is too far, my father will admit in the new school close by. Hence, it is my request to provide the transfer certificate at the earliest.

Thanking You,

Yours Faithfully,

Israr Aslam

28-11-2018

 

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Editing and explaining the mistakes for Abdulraziq Minawal 

Editing and explaining the mistakes for Abdulraziq Minawal

Work is best for all humans if we want to improve my body in our life because work is makes good health of all humans.

We should do working everday a little but not very

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Mistake-1 :-

We use pronoun “Our” with “We”

For example:-

WE want to improve MY body (wrong)

WE want to improve OUR body (Correct)

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Mistake – 2

You said

Work is makes good health (wrong)

Work makes good health (correct)

Because

In Present Indefinite, only main verb is used to denote action of a sentence
Don’t use “Is / are / am)

In order to know, how to identify Present Indefinite sentences, read the post below

Know about Present Indefinite Tense 

 

 

 

 

 

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Mistake – 3

We should do working everday (wrong)

We should do “work” everyday (correct)

Or

We should “work” everyday (correct)

Because

“ING” is used in CONTINUOUS TENSES denoted by the following helping verbs

Is/ are / am/ was/ were/ will be

 

Other  examples

We are working

He is going

They were sleep

He was eating

I will be going to his house

 

 

 

 

Happy Birthday Nilambar Biswas

Happy Birthday Nilambar Biswas

I wish that you get all the success in life

Your elder brother Arpit Sharma wish you “Nilambar Biswas ”

“Many Many Happy Returns of the Day”

Dear Nilambar Biswas,

I can’t thank you more for being the most loving, caring and awesome person

 

Keep on working hard. Success will touch your feet for sure.

Once again, Happy B’day.

Remember me in your prayers.

Thanks again for being my friend.

You rock Nilambar Biswas:)

 

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Happy Birthday Syanda Khanyile

Happy Birthday Syanda Khanyile

 

Your elder brother Arpit Sharma wish you “Syanda Khanyile” “Many Happy Returns of the day”

Dear Syanda Khanyile,

I can’t thank you more for being the most loving, caring and awesome friend

I can’t thank you more for giving the most loving, caring and awesome company by sharing so much and have a great bond in the course of time.

It indeed proved to be such a memorable get together in the company of my friends

Keep on working hard. Success will touch your feet for sure.

Once again, Happy B’day.

Remember me in your prayers.

Thanks again for being my friend.

You rock Syanda Khanyile:)

Your lovingly,

Arpit Sharma
Read : How to write a fairwell speech for your friend 

Requesting Principal to give five days leave for attending sister’s marriage

Requesting Principal to give five days leave for sister’s marriage

Very important tip which many forget:-

Always send the invitation letter to the Principal (with the LEAVE LETTER) to attend the event. It works. 

 



The principal,

City Montessori School,

Aliganj, Lucknow

Subject ( Application to grant leave for five days due to attending marriage party of my sister)

Sir/Ma’am,

I am Arpit Sharma student of Class 10th A, requests you to kindly give me leave for five days i.e from 12th December to 16th December, 2018

My sister is getting married and being a close family member, there is  loads of responsibility on my shoulders for addressing the needs of the occasion.  As per the necessity of the event, I will think of taking leave only if you accept my request.

Also, I am sending you the invitation letter  inviting you to attend the party




I will be highly obliged,

Thanking You,

Regards,

Arpit Sharma
Class 10th Student

C.M.S

11–01–2017

 

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Happy Birthday RK on your 21st B’day

Happy Birthday RK on your 21st B’day

Your elder brother Arpit Sharma wish you “Ravi Krishna” on your 21st Birthday

Dear RK,

I can’t thank you more for being the most loving, caring and awesome friend

I can’t thank you more for giving the most loving, caring and awesome company by sharing so much and have a great bond in the course of time.

It indeed proved to be such a memorable get together in the company of my friends

Keep on working hard. Success will touch your feet for sure.

Once again, Happy B’day.

Remember me in your prayers.

Thanks again for being my friend.

You rock RK 🙂

Your lovingly,

Arpit Sharma
English Teacher
 

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Letter Taking permission to pick son personally instead of school bus

Letter Taking permission to pick son personally instead of school bus

The Principal,
City Montessori School,
Aliganj, Lucknow
Subject ( Taking permission to pick son personally instead of school bus)
Sir/Ma’am,

This is Pankaj Sharma, father of Arpit Sharma student of Class 10th- A requests you to kindly allow me to pick him after school today, instead of school bus.

Yes, I am picking him up today due to some family work.
Kindly allow me,

Thanking You,

Yours Faithfully,
Pankaj Sharma
Father of Arpit Sharma
student of Class 10th- A
Date – 22nd November, 2018

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Writing a meaningful THANKSGIVING letter to inmates

How do I write a meaningful Thanksgiving letter to intimates?

Letter of thanks to inmates

Dear All,

This is Mathew. I can’t thank you more for giving the most loving, caring and awesome company by sharing so much and have a great bond in the course of time.
Yes, that has been quite a pleasant shift away from the hard realities and circumstances which made us pay for those crimes.

Thanks for taking out pains for gelling so well.

It indeed proved to be such a memorable get together in the company of my friends while everyone enjoyed thoroughly.

I was the proudest friend, especially when everyone was praising me for being humble and down to earth, which I equally felt the same to each and everyone of you.

I know that you love me a lot, and I also write this letter as an opportunity to apologize for those tantrums or naughtiness which I used to do, to make you sad, in the process.

Thanks again for such a pleasant surprise, right at the time when I least expected.
I am starting a new life after ending my tenure and ofcourse realizing my mistakes.. I expect everyone of you to be equally law abiding where many of you will soon be ending your tenure.

Start life afresh and I request everyone to never repeat mistakes

You rock 🙂

Your lovingly,

Mathew

 

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 Bibas Basnet wished you papa “Bishnu Bahadur Basnet” on your 56th Birthday 

Bibas Basnet wished you papa “Bishnu Bahadur Basnet” on your 56th Birthday

Your loving and proud son Bibas Basnet, is wishing you  a Happy and Loving Birthday, on this special day of yous.

He sends such a beautiful quote to you

Happy birthday to you, dad, just know that I love you and that I would not know where I am right now if you are not there for me to guide me through it all.

 

 

Dear Father,

I can’t thank you more for being the most loving, caring and awesome father by always standing for me

Thanks for taking out pains to make me what I am today.  I can’t thank you more for always standing for me and giving me such a pleasant and fruitful life.

I am the proudest son, especially when other praise me, and I wholeheartedly thank you. It is due to your upbringing.

You are the reason, why I cherished so many moments.

I know that you love me a lot, and I also take this event as opportunity to apologize for those tantrums or naughtiness which I used to do, to make you sad.

I promise that from now on, I won’t be making you sad or disheartened in any manner.

Expect me now to be your obedient son, who will always be there to give you smiles and make this beautiful bond of mother and son, even more special.

Now, with passing time, I have realized, how much you love me as you have selflessly sacrificed so much, to make me what I am today.

It is time for me to repay back, in whatever way I possibly can.

Thanks again for being my father.

You rock papa:)

Your lovingly,

Bibas Basnet

 

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Perfecthappy Tugsjargal :- Belated happy B’day

Dear Tugsjargal,

Belated Happy B’day from your Indian friend. Arpit Sharma. I can’t thank you more for being the most loving, caring and awesome Facebook friend.

Sorry, I am late to wish you. Forgive me for that but I always hope and pray that you get everything which you deserve.

Keep on working hard. Success will touch your feet for sure.

Once again, belated Happy B’day.

Remember me in your prayers.

 

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Writing a letter of absence from a meeting

Letter of Absence from meeting 

Informing “afterwards” is usually the phase, when you couldn’t inform before. Obviously, it is an emergency situation, where you couldn’t inform before.

So, based on the unforeseen situation, you are writing the letter to the company HR / manager

  1. Yes, write down the things which the doctor has told to you 

  2. Also, it is even better, if you attach a Medical Leave Certificate along with the letter

 

The HR,

X Company,

Y Area,

Z city

Subject (letter of absence from  meeting due to fever)




Sir/Ma’am,

This is X (your name + Designation) wish to inform you that due to sudden high fever followed by vomiting, I have no choice, but to take urgent leave. Due to which, I was unable to attend the meeting. The doctor advised me to take complete rest for a day

 

I had also informed on the number (mention the number)

Now, as I have re-joined, as part of my professional duty, I am also mentioning the same through a written letter.




Thanking You,

Yours Faithfully,

X Name

y Designation

Z (your Signature and Date)

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Request letter to the Principal to conduct workshop on IT sector

Request letter to the Principal to conduct workshop on IT sector



Read : Requesting the Principal to give one last chance to sit in the class

Now, check the following letter

 

The Principal,

Y Designation,

Aliganj, Lucknow

Subject (Request letter to the Principal to conduct workshop on IT sector )



Sir/Ma’am,

I am X (Your name) of ____ (mention class) request you to conduct a IT related workshop

 

As IT students, we are very thankful to the teachers for guiding us with the informative methods. All of us are very inspired by the ideology of teaching staff and every student wants to undergo a workshop which can give a practical and more constructive approach to the things we have learnt.

The workshop will indeed be highly inspiring and motivating. It will equally give a refreshing zeal of life.

Read : Application to the Principal for re-checking examination

It will equally be a matter of great pride for the school which is known for best results and the students are upbeat.

The students need to enhance their motivational energy where conducting a IT related workshop will be the best remedy for them

As a student, I am already very honored to be a part of such an esteemed college and your introspection will be the best way to give the right motivational level, to all students.

Read : Requesting the Principal to use the library 

I am looking forward for your favorable response,

I will be highly obliged,

Thank You in advance ,

Regards,

Arpita Sharma

Class ____ X college

11–01–2017

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Request letter to invite eminent personality to deliver lecture in your school

Request letter to invite eminent personality to deliver lecture in your school



Read : Requesting the Principal to give one last chance to sit in the class

Now, check the following letter

 

The X (Name of the Personality),

Y Designation,

Aliganj, Lucknow

Subject (Request letter to invite eminent personality to deliver lecture in your school
)



Sir/Ma’am,

I am X (Your name) Principal of X esteemed college,  requests your benign presence  in our school to deliver guest lecture

All of us are very inspired by your ideology and every student wants your presence in our school on the Special day. Your lectures are highly inspiring, motivating and gives a refreshing zeal of life. Sir, your presence will help the school with new zeal and enthusiasm by charging everyone’s mind and soul.

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It will equally be a matter of great pride for the school which is known for best results and the students are upbeat to welcome you.

The students need to enhance their motivational energy where your invaluable speech will be the best remedy for them

As the head of the school, I am already very honored to be a part of such an esteemed college and your gracious presence will be the best way to give the right motivational level.

Read : Requesting the Principal to use the library 

I am looking forward for your favorable response,

I will be highly obliged,

Thank You in advance ,

Regards,

Arpita Sharma

Principal : X college

C.M.S

11–01–2017

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Letter to the school head to provide dispensary

Letter to school head to provide dispensary

The principal,

City Montessori School,

Aliganj, Lucknow

Subject :- (Request to provide a dispensary)

Sir/Ma’am,

 

This is Arpita Sharma, a Class 5th student requests you to provide first aid facility, in the form of dispensary.

I am really thankful for the ideology of the school which stands for the needs of the students by grooming them in their overall development. The need for first-aid is also of utmost importance, considering the recent injuries which students have got while playing.

I bruised my knees yesterday in the school hours, but couldn’t get proper band-aid.

Unfortunately, the delay in getting timely medical facility has infact delayed the healing process by few days. As I could only go to the doctor after school.

Considering such a reputed organization, your exemplary teaching methods and willingness to always stand for the student has always been the most motivating and energizing factor.  Likewise, it is the need of students to provide dispensary, so that they may be saved from untoward and untimely incidents.

Kindly, look in the matter

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Regards,

Arpit Sharma
Class 10th Student

C.M.S

11–01–2017

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Letter of thanks to mother for giving surprise birthday party and inviting friends 

Letter of thanks to mother for giving surprise birthday party and inviting friends

Dear Mom,

I can’t thank you more for being the most loving, caring and awesome mom by making my birthday even more special

Thanks for taking out pains to make it such a grand and lavish event.  I can’t thank you more for the sumptuous dishes which were so mouthwatering.

It indeed proved to be such a memorable get together in the company of my friends while everyone enjoyed thoroughly.

I was the proudest son, especially when everyone was praising your efforts as you successfully manged to make the celebration worth memorable and priceless

I know that you love me a lot, and I also take this event as opportunity to apologize for those tantrums or naughtiness which I used to do, to make you sad.

I promise that from now on, I won’t be making you sad or disheartened in any manner.

Mom, expect me now to be your obedient son, who will always be there to give you smiles and make this beautiful bond of mother and son, even more special.

Now, with passing time, I have realized, how much you love me as you have selflessly sacrified so much, to make me what I am today.

It is time for me to repay back, in whatever way I possibly can.

Thanks again for such a pleasant surprise, right at the time when I least expected.

You rock mom 🙂

Your lovingly,

Mathew

 

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